Looking for Copywriting Expert to Review My Email Campaign

posted in the wrong chat so here we go again: I am looking for someone who is a copywriting expert to "roast" my email drip campaign for a M&A firm that has hired me. I have the google sheet ready to send. Looking to have some fun and pick up some skills if anyone is interested in roasting me. Thanks!

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shrey n.
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When do we start buddy😂
Laz G.
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I do cold email copywriting. Send it my way in Google Docs format or Notion Doc and I'm happy to offer my two cents.
Griffin D.
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Laz G. and shrey n. take a look! I appreciate all the help! I am very much an amateur copy writer so appreciate any help! https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ddzGl5spzIBo82_24HpHKWJZ0SSBofBzAtPD6SXJo-o/edit?tab=t.sicbgpjirqqo
Laz G.
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How much have you tested these?
Laz G.
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At first glance reading these (I did two re-reads), it's not clear you're an M&A firm. I thought you were talking about market demand / connecting them to buyers who need roofing services.
Griffin D.
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Laz G. We have not tested these yet, this is a new market for us and opportunity, The is to relay that right now the roofing industry is getting higher multiples and that it might warrant a conversation if they have thought about selling. These are all private companies in different cities/states and the list is segmented to commercial / residential work. We are leveraging the review count of the business to determine likely revenue size because outside of that it is very difficult
Laz G.
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That’s smart
Laz G.
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Nice proxy for value
Griffin D.
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yeah would be really cool to pull in other areas like ad spending etc, not sure how to do that though
Laz G.
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Can’t do ad spending but can check ads with Adyntel
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Griffin D.
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i also am toying with the psychology of the response, we are competiting with Private Equity groups and buy side advisors so its difficult to seperate outselves in messaging that someone will actually read
Griffin D.
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ill check out adyntel, does it have a clay integration?
Laz G.
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yep