Request for Feedback on LinkedIn Post About Remote Hiring

Nazir
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Nice post! I would’ve removed the first line — the hook is super important on LinkedIn, it does 80% of the job! Are you a recruiter, by the way?
Nic
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Thanks Nazir, yes, I work in recruitment. Thanks for the tip. I’ve been working on refining my LinkedIn Posts to get some more traction, so any advice is appreciated.
Nic
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Just to be clear, are saying I should remove this line “🌍 𝗨𝗻𝗹𝗼𝗰𝗸𝗶𝗻𝗴 𝗚𝗹𝗼𝗯𝗮𝗹 𝗢𝗽𝗽𝗼𝗿𝘁𝘂𝗻𝗶𝘁𝗶𝗲𝘀: 𝗧𝗼𝗽 10 𝗥𝗲𝗺𝗼𝘁𝗲 𝗥𝗼𝗹𝗲𝘀 𝗼𝘂𝘁 𝗼𝗳 𝗦𝗼𝘂𝘁𝗵 𝗔𝗳𝗿𝗶𝗰𝗮! 🇿🇦💻”
Nazir
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Yes this line !
Nic
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Got. Thanks Nazir.
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